Saturday, October 10, 2009

(:..For you.. The girl in Green.. :)


Metro from Rithala to Dilshad...
There's nothing good in it.. because there's nothing bad...
People get in and out at every stop...
And I prefer sleeping while watching this daily soap...

Rohini West.. you climbed up and sat on the seat opposite to mine...
You were with a friend of yours..and I saw your looks were just fine..
Took out a comb and you settled your hair letting it collide...
I tried to concentrate hard on the editorial and pushed my ear plugs inside...

My regular glances here and there.. they were all meant for you...
You looked back... Were you even looking at me??.. or enjoying the outside view..??.
Just as our eyes met for the nano of seconds...
I tried to look away... or to the newspaper I reckoned..

"People confuse the metro as their study room".. you said and your friend started laughing..
An open mock thrown at me??... Speak something.. Save your prestige from half-ing...
Game on.. I folded the Newspaper.. felling like the frame of Gable...
"These days people think the Metro is their make-up table..".

That worked.. you stunned... you smiled.. you did many things together, like the don of Dubai..
"Hello I am ****.. Do you live nearby??.."..
And as you asked the Uncle sitting beside you, to change his place with mine..
"No I live in the East.. Why?.. is everything fine??."..

Of the dancing dandoos that I try everyday.... When you asked, "What do you do??."..
"I write blogs".. was the answer that came out of my beak without any ado..
"Wow.. what are blogs by the way..", I didn't know that you didn't know..
"They are web spaces where I publish some appo and grappo"...

Pulbangash.. That's where you had to get down...
"So, will you write a blog for me??."..  you smiled and took your bag around..
"Sure.. Let me see what I can write for you", I said like Rushdie, like I was the only sheen...
This goes out for you girl.. The Metro girl in green...





12 comments:

Gangeyyo said...

* Fiction

S... said...

great...
:)

Medhavin said...

Going good dude! ;)

ABHi said...

mazaa a gya... nice read!

Vivek Bijlwan said...

:)

Anonymous said...

nice...

akanksha said...

fiction??? :-( ...
but hey it was nice..doing good dude..:-)

Aanchal said...

im surprised the poem doesnt mention anything about exchanging phone numbers..........strange....... :)

Gangeyyo said...
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Gangeyyo said...

@aanchal....
hushhhhh.. :P

Anurupa Ganguli said...

Some time back I remember telling you that you should have been writing instead of being an engineer..I guess I was not wrong because you have actually written a poem revealing a sweet story in it...and all those lines actually rhyme..so must say this is really good..though I loved the other one you had published earlier...

But was this really fiction???

Whatever it rocks..:)

!..an inconcievable mind.. a quixotic heart..! said...

Dude.. amazing stuff yar...chod de engineering yar...kb se bola hai maine tujhe..!!!
:)..

as usual great poem.. i hope its not a fiction..!!:)